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Monday, February 20, 2006
  All's Ailing
I would love to complain, but,
What would I achieve by railing,

I would sadden for I'm sickly, but,
I cry to see everyone's ailing,

How shall I get across,
When none of the boats are sailing,

I worked to stand victorious,
Yet I always ended up trailing,

What, Oh what shall I come to try,
When every success ends up failing,

How to console my teary eyes,
When even the air arround me is wailing,

I hope and wait, but it is the same air,
The air I exhale and thats what I'm inhaling,

These cravings shall not cease to devour,
Still, I would not cease their tailing,

I am a fool, I am an illiterate,
And it's illiteracy thats prevailing,

Oh, Salute to you oh life,
Of what newnesses you keep unveiling...

***
The ailing sees just ailing all around and ecstatic discovers only ecstasy.
 
Comments:
Nice Poem. Deep. Hope it is just a poem and not ur state of mind. Enjoy...
 
liked ur last post-- lust

Manish
 
"The ailing sees just ailing all around and ecstatic discovers only ecstasy."
True,True,very True.But the ailing around us cant sure be overlooked.
Really nice of you Sneha, to write on matters other than emotions,so now we can get to know about your thoughts in a much more complete manner.
Cheers!!!
 
pessimistic views haan?

pls to forgive, i am bad at understanding poems!!!
 
wow ... someones getting poetic haan .. and they say ki shes ANPADH .. huh !!

Hey take this hankerchief .. wipe ur tears .. look in to d mirror .. see how pathetic u look ... now go & wash ur face ... look in to d mirror again .. ya thts d smile m talkin abt .

cheer up gal . hota hai hota hai ... and sometimes this HONA is gud as well .. or all wud be to boring.

cheer up & tc.
 
True you wish to see what you want to see. Things dicussed are because we are caught in tangles of relations and emotions.

I cry to see everyone's ailing.. hmm but by the free will of our mind we can overcome it..what do you feel

Well, free will is it a topic "in itself", like "that thing in itself" (das ding an sich - famous quote by Kant, a German philosopher)..

Things how we perceive and the thing in itself, quite a funny notion isn't it dear one..

like a curious kid, what color is that 'free will' :D . Something we 'can' excercise amidst every emotional confusion.

Am sure there are answers buried in the deepest recess of ur mind, bring it out on the diary ..a reader's request.. :)
 
well done love....nice one....
 
True...there is ailing all around.
 
I am a fool, I am an illiterate,
And it's illiteracy thats prevailing,

Suddenly I feel threated abuot a competitor...is that you?
 
Nice post. And a nice point that you make there. What we are is how we see things around us, don't we? The general we. But no. Not always. If you had the capacity to think, you wouldn't. But situations can numb the grey cells from thinking. And so, its a nice post.
 
Oh suds,
Thanks you dear.. not now, but then it was. But its welcome.

Oh manish,
Thanks.

Oh Ayush,
Thank you dear. I will try to do this more often. :). Express my state in words...

Oh Iyer,
Hmm.. You could call them pissimistic but optimism isn't always the good one.

Oh Anuj,
Lolzz.. You're funny. I know this happens.. And I'm cheerful :)

Oh Φ,
We can certianly overcome it. We have a lot of power, but dearth of dedication and faith ruins us. Dubiety is the ruiner.

Free Will. Hmm... Thats a tough one. Sneha will surely try to give her 2 cents. :).

Oh Nandya,
Thanks dear girl. Lolz..

Oh Rebel,
:) Just how we choose to see it.

Oh Arz00n,
Beware, I'm her! The competitor! Lolz!

Oh Individualist,
Lolz.. What a derivation for the result. Thanks..
 
I am a first time visitor. Came across your blog through nandu's. Some unique writing I must say. It was a pleasure.
 
the rhyming is slightly shallow, but the meaning is not.
i feel as if i am ailing
 
I might have been stupid to have overlooked it once,but is ailing truly your current state of mind
 
Oh kutti,
Thanks... Keep visiting. :)

Oh Phoenix,
The meaning is all anything needs... Thanks...

Oh Ayush,
At times yes.
 
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